The Balloon Story by Bree

Imagine your most favourite spot in the world or a place you like to visit.

At this spot, you are waiting to leave with a group of people on a hot-air balloon.  Three of you all won a trip on this balloon.  As you step into the balloon with the other two people you accidentally kick the rope that was holding the balloon to the ground. It suddenly lifts off the ground without the person who was going to take the three of you on the tour.

“Tom and Ben were screaming they were so scared. I told them to calm down. I gave them each a job to do. Ben told me that he was 25 and he also told me that he was a carpenter. Tom told me that he was 27 and he also told me he was a painter. I told Tom to start jumping up and down. I told ben to throw down the bean bags .I leaned the basket to the right and we snagged the balloon on a tree branch and we slowly floated to the ground. The police and tour guide met us on the ground.”


About Sunset Elementary School

Mr. Mollinga is the Grade 4/5 teacher at Sunset School.
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